WIP ' Dragon Knights Of Demhaer '

Yiemorx

Yiemorx

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The first 2 pages of my manga. Let me know what you guys/girls think!

Page 1:
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Page 2:
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Page 3:
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Page 4:
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UPDATE - 7/04/2019:
We have added 2 new pages. How ever we have just launched our website. you can grab a full copy of the pdf over on our sites page.

https://halfslice.studio/product/dragon-knights-of-demhaer/
 
It looks good man and the art is kinda cool too. I recognize wind, water, fire, thunder but I dont get the last element.
May be you could work on that a little?
 
Nameless said:
It looks good man and the art is kinda cool too. I recognize wind, water, fire, thunder but I dont get the last element.
May be you could work on that a little?
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Alright thanks!
 
blackrose said:
@angel and @ace check this out
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I have a friend who has been doing that art for me. Once vol 1 of the manga is completed ill look into getting it on a manga site. but for now id be happy to keep posting new pages onto this thread
 
I don't like some of the wording and how and how you summarised the story in the very first blurb. But great art, very indie.
 
Yiemorx said:
I have a friend who has been doing that art for me. Once vol 1 of the manga is completed ill look into getting it on a manga site. but for now id be happy to keep posting new pages onto this thread
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I see
That's awesome..make sure you tag me when you update ok :)
 
@angel and @ace check this out
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it looks good but you keep forgetting that i read manga a lot.
art is not very top rate but it's good enough. opening of the story can be better. i decided to drop or read the manga after the first 3-4 pages.
 
Angel said:
it looks good but you keep forgetting that i read manga a lot.
art is not very top rate but it's good enough. opening of the story can be better. i decided to drop or read the manga after the first 3-4 pages.
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I guess but I like it still and this person is giving their heart to it
I really like the start of the story though..I love things like this
 
blackrose said:
I guess but I like it still and this person is giving their heart to it
I really like the start of the story though..I love things like this
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you asked for my opinion.
and i know you like it and the author said, it will have a happy ending so you don't have to worry about dark things
 
Angel said:
you asked for my opinion.
and i know you like it and the author said, it will have a happy ending so you don't have to worry about dark things
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Yes I did and thanks for sharing it :)
Well I guess but let's see how it goes
 
blackrose said:
Yes I did and thanks for sharing it :)
Well I guess but let's see how it goes
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i will read it too.
@yietmx do you plan to have colored pages at any point for this manga?
 
Angel said:
i will read it too.
@yietmx do you plan to have colored pages at any point for this manga?
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As it is my first manga i do not think i will have coloured pages. However if the first volume is received well, i will make the rest of the volumes in colour and then re do the first volume in colour at a later date.
 
Yiemorx said:
As it is my first manga i do not think i will have coloured pages. However if the first volume is received well, i will make the rest of the volumes in colour and then re do the first volume in colour at a later date.
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most of the manga have colored pages only for epic moments. i don't recommend colored pages for the entire manga.
not even the best selling manga one piece has full colored pages
 
Angel said:
most of the manga have colored pages only for epic moments. i don't recommend colored pages for the entire manga.
not even the best selling manga one piece has full colored pages
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Hmm ok, I may do that then.
 
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