Silver_Fox
Banned
This series is a good one, but as good as it is there is also flaw in it. For a free brawl competition this series lack some spices, and that is fighting between the diary holder other. What i meant here is the fighting is too focusing with Yukiteru and Yuno with the other diary holder, beside of them i can say that we know only little or almost nothing about other holder competing each other.
I know that they are the main protagonists but i think.. for this kind of competition, showing fight between another diary holder is necessary because in the way they run the show it give impression that 'Yukiteru and Yuno must overcome the rest of diary holder' than 'free competition for all diary holder'. If the author want focus on Yukiteru and Yuno then he better change the basic concept of the competition, because.. in the way the series were run, the other diary user looks like mere supporting characters than important member of those who competing to become the next God
I know that they are the main protagonists but i think.. for this kind of competition, showing fight between another diary holder is necessary because in the way they run the show it give impression that 'Yukiteru and Yuno must overcome the rest of diary holder' than 'free competition for all diary holder'. If the author want focus on Yukiteru and Yuno then he better change the basic concept of the competition, because.. in the way the series were run, the other diary user looks like mere supporting characters than important member of those who competing to become the next God