Silver_Fox
Banned
There are things that i want to re-write to make it perfect. So..
First is Minmay. How did she won Miss Macross contest just like that? If it's me, i'll make the contest is all about talent, so.. Minmay will sing, and everyone get charmed by her voice and BAM! she own the contest. That would be more make sense than just 'beauty contest' like depicted on the series
Second is Millia. The marriage between Max and Millia is very very important moment for the series. I think.. we need more dramatic and emphasize on those two. Max is 'oh wow.. she's just my type' and Millia is 'i was defeated thrice, do as you wish..' hahaha.. where is the romance??
Third is Misa. She's the only survivor of Alaska base, really? How come that everyone died and she alive. If i was in charge i'll make her father save her and put her into strong underground facility before Zentradi's main fleet wipe out the earth. That would be more make sense
That's all, everything else is just fine
First is Minmay. How did she won Miss Macross contest just like that? If it's me, i'll make the contest is all about talent, so.. Minmay will sing, and everyone get charmed by her voice and BAM! she own the contest. That would be more make sense than just 'beauty contest' like depicted on the series
Second is Millia. The marriage between Max and Millia is very very important moment for the series. I think.. we need more dramatic and emphasize on those two. Max is 'oh wow.. she's just my type' and Millia is 'i was defeated thrice, do as you wish..' hahaha.. where is the romance??
Third is Misa. She's the only survivor of Alaska base, really? How come that everyone died and she alive. If i was in charge i'll make her father save her and put her into strong underground facility before Zentradi's main fleet wipe out the earth. That would be more make sense
That's all, everything else is just fine