I want to improve Naruto, of course in my version

Silver_Fox
Yamainu

(05-28-2019, 05:29 PM)MadaraUchiha Wrote: I personally wouldn't take him out because I like him a lot I think Kishi started to mess up his character just about the time the War arc began. Co-incidentally Naruto itself started falling about as a story around that time so it's not just him.

Seriously.. the overall story is actually good enough, i like the conflict between Sanju and Uchiha and how are the conflict drive the story into present is neat. In my opinion i only need to separate Naruto and Sasuke

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MadaraUchiha
Akatsuki

(05-28-2019, 05:46 PM)Poseidon Wrote: Seriously.. the overall story is actually good enough, i like the conflict between Sanju and Uchiha and how are the conflict drive the story into present is neat. In my opinion i only need to separate Naruto and Sasuke


I get that one of the main over-arching stories of Naruto apart from Naruto becoming Hokage is to end the conflict between the Senju and the Uchiha and that is represented through Naruto and Sasuke. And it sort of mirrors Hashirama and Madara. So the whole thing can happen only when Naruto and Sasuke start to develop a friendship in the first place and only then can Naruto interfere in the whole revenge arc of Sasuke and Itachi.

" Justice is subject to dispute; might is easily recognized and is not disputed. So we cannot give might to justice, because might has gainsaid justice, and has declared that it is she herself who is just. And thus, being unable to make what is just strong, we have made what is strong just."
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Silver_Fox
Yamainu

(05-28-2019, 05:55 PM)MadaraUchiha Wrote: I get that one of the main over-arching stories of Naruto apart from Naruto becoming Hokage is to end the conflict between the Senju and the Uchiha and that is represented through Naruto and Sasuke. And it sort of mirrors Hashirama and Madara. So the whole thing can happen only when Naruto and Sasuke start to develop a friendship in the first place and only then can Naruto interfere in the whole revenge arc of Sasuke and Itachi.

If that's the case i'll change Sasuke attitude to more friendly and worthy person. As for the incident of Uchiha clan i'll make it on screen, not a past incident so Naruto will make more sense to me, it will justified Naruto's obsession to Sasuke because he's worthy to be called first friend

The BlueFog
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MadaraUchiha
Akatsuki

(05-28-2019, 06:04 PM)Poseidon Wrote: If that's the case i'll change Sasuke attitude to more friendly and worthy person. As for the incident of Uchiha clan i'll make it on screen, not a past incident so Naruto will make more sense to me, it will justified Naruto's obsession to Sasuke because he's worthy to be called first friend


While he was pretty rude to everyone initially he was starting to open up especially after the Chuunin exams arc but when Itachi came back to Konoha and schooled him that entirely messed him up mentally because it was really apparent how strong Itachi was to him. That sort of made him to go a spiral. Maybe they could have postponed that event alone, maybe an arc in between to show how Sasuke had actually changed and then Itachi could have come to the village.

" Justice is subject to dispute; might is easily recognized and is not disputed. So we cannot give might to justice, because might has gainsaid justice, and has declared that it is she herself who is just. And thus, being unable to make what is just strong, we have made what is strong just."
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Silver_Fox
Yamainu

(05-28-2019, 06:32 PM)MadaraUchiha Wrote: While he was pretty rude to everyone initially he was starting to open up especially after the Chuunin exams arc but when Itachi came back to Konoha and schooled him that entirely messed him up mentally because it was really apparent how strong Itachi was to him. That sort of made him to go a spiral. Maybe they could have postponed that event alone, maybe an arc in between to show how Sasuke had actually changed and then Itachi could have come to the village.

That could be work too, at least show the audiences that Sasuke is someone who worthy of friendship and loyalty

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Blackrose
Gotei

(05-28-2019, 02:08 PM)Poseidon Wrote: I forget.. i'll keep Neji alive too, i like him

Neji is cool and also that guy with the weird eyebrows lol

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Silver_Fox
Yamainu

(05-29-2019, 04:09 AM)Blackrose Wrote: Neji is cool and also that guy with the weird eyebrows lol

Bruce Lee wannabe haha..

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Blackrose
Gotei

(05-29-2019, 10:04 AM)Poseidon Wrote: Bruce Lee wannabe haha..

I like him cus he's funny

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Silver_Fox
Yamainu

(05-29-2019, 12:52 PM)Blackrose Wrote: I like him cus he's funny

You like funny guy?

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Blackrose
Gotei

(05-29-2019, 01:09 PM)Poseidon Wrote: You like funny guy?

Which girl doesn't...I mean it's better than a serious one who has no sense of humor

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